At a time when "unemployment line" has the ring of a phrase from a long-ago
world, and a tall decaf cappuccino is considered by many to be a staple
without which life is not worth living, Therese Svoboda has scrabbled about
in the dirt on the outskirts of mainstream America and sculpted 15 memorable
representations of the souls who inhabit those places.
Therese Svoboda is the author of a novel and three books of poetry. In this
collection of short stories, every word feels as if it has been measured for
its weight, and every line tested for rhythm. The stories begin like
kaleidoscopes, mishmashes of details that set the reader off-balance until he
or she slowly wades through one paragraph after another, paying close
attention, and the grains begin to meld into a recognizable, and
disconcerting, shape.
"Electricity" begins with a flash in the sky and a man's fall from a grain
bin, two startling three-dimensional images that flatten out into an exchange
of words that reveal, in an understated manner, a complex, disturbing life
story. The man is taken to the hospital by volunteer ambulance workers, whom
he managed to call after his accident. We expect to see next a scene that
involves the concerned family and the man's struggle for rehabilitation, but
Svoboda steps in here and raps our hands gently, drawing our attention to a
reality we'd rather avoid. The man's mother and father are informed of the
accident. "But the parents have their lives: he is almost forty. And it isn't
as if this is his first accident, no, it is a Wolf he has cried too often.
All those seizure problems --- this time it is just electricity."
"A Mama" affords us a grim glimpse into the daily routine of a social worker
whose job is to pry children away from their clinging, abusive parents each
morning, then return them to the violent homes at night. The social worker's
conscious, studied detachment is contrasted with the thoughts of a young mothe
r brooding over her baby ("it"): "You are given children when they are too
small, but if you wait, your chance is up for experiment. For now, it fits
good inside the car seat on the table and says nothing if I leave the room,
even when I put on salt. This disappoints me. Salt should get a noise out of
it."
In the title story, Svoboda takes us even lower in the social strata, to a
woman who by mainstream society's definition is scraping the bottom of the
barrel. The character heats cat food for dinner and greedily licks ketchup
off of a paper plate she reuses day after day, until it is stiff with saliva
and food remains. She lives in a trailer court in the rural Midwest, and life
in that tiny world is witnessed through her veering, arbitrary narrative
focus. She spends her days desperately trying to catch a young girl that she
claims lives in a nearby field. In this world, reality becomes whatever its
inhabitants manage to make of it. Nearly catatonic from heartbreak, drugs,
and the dreary landscape, Svoboda's main character often loses her bearings,
such as when "a baby cries behind me and sometimes any baby can be anyone's
and I turn to fetch it, forgetting."
Svoboda dazzles her readers with colors, calls, and gestures in scenes that
we don't immediately understand. But each time, without fail, she is true to
her poetic calling and wipes away the initial cloudiness of the story's
slate, revealing disturbing truths whose images will insinuate themselves
during our real lives --- as we order a cappuccino at a coffee shop or step
into our orderly, secure homes at night. Her creations will never rest
quietly in our minds, but will remind us of the breadth of the world and the
smallness of the piece that each of us samples from it.
--- Reviewed by Stephanie Sorensen